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I
This is what plane geometry (Euclidian geometry)
tells me;
it tells me that [a];
(the long, curving line
of your neck, outlined
in the darkest of chestnut curls
)
plus [b];
(the swell of your hip
rising from the sheets, the sweet temptation
and the beautiful mystery of the
hidden
)
equals [c];
(the wonder that you
perhaps do not see in my gaze
when you catch me
staring
)

II
Euclid’s Five Postulates
tell me;
1.  Let the following be postulated: to follow
with my fingertips
the flower of your lips
and the swan’s curve of your
jaw


2.  To produce [extend] a finite limb with infinite
elegance
ad infinitum widening my eyes
and awing me with your
unwitting dancer’s grace


3.  To describe a circle on the
glorious plateau of your stomach
to trace around your belly button
navigating the breathtaking landscape
of your valleys and knolls


4.  That all will be right with the world
when the angles of my angel’s arms
circumscribe a closed figure about my
body, that we are
equal to one another


5.  The parallel postulate: That, if upon falling
in love
I become greater than I was
before we met;
we will exist parallel to one another
indefinitely [yes]


III
Euclid [I] believed
that his axioms were self-evident statements
about physical reality.
All I know is that; (taken as a physical
description of space,
postulate 2)
asserting that space [and love] has no
boundaries
(i.e., they are homogenous);
and [postulate 4]
that they [we] are also isotropic,
so that figures [we] may be moved
to any location [and to any distance]
while maintaining
[happiness; devotion; ardor]
congruence.

IV
This is what plane geometry (Euclidian geometry)
does not need to tell me;
you + me =
geometric perfection
[love.]
©2009 =stormchylde
:iconstormchylde:

Author's Comments

Firstly, this was written from a male perspective. That might seem weird, but I find it easier to describe females in terms of gushy romantic sentiment, whereas describing males just always ends up being sexy in a more...rock-climbing kind of way. XD Does that make sense?

This was a prompt game with =austheke (Here's hers! [link] ). For my first time writing poetry in...gosh, easily at least a year, probably more...and my first time really writing poetry that I actually like, 100%, I think this is pretty good. C:

And just so you all know...I'm really bad at math. I very much dislike these sort of theorems and postulates. But this is cute, admit it.

Here are the actual theorems and postulates I based this one:

I
Pythagorean Theorem: a^2 + b^2 = c^2

II
1. Let the following be postulated: to draw a straight line from any point to any point.
2. To produce [extend] a finite straight line continuously in a straight line.
3. To describe a circle with any center and distance [radius].
4. That all right angles are equal to one another.
5. The parallel postulate: That, if a straight line falling on two straight lines make the interior angles on the same side less than two right angles, the two straight lines, if produced indefinitely, meet on that side on which are the angles less than the two right angles.

III
"Euclid believed that his axioms were self-evident statements about physical reality. Taken as a physical description of space, postulate 2 (extending a line) asserts that space does not have holes or boundaries (i.e., space is homogenous); postulate 4 (equality of right angles) says that space is homogeneous and isotropic, so that figures may be moved to any location while maintaining congruence; and postulate 5 that space is flat (has no intrinsic curvature).[18] As discussed in more detail below, Einstein's theory of relativity significantly modifies this view." (From the Wiki page on Euclidian Geometry)


Enjoy~

And Aus...POST YOURS. D< I LOVE IT.

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:iconaustheke:
MINE IS CHEESY SHIT.

How did you do it? Theorems are not worded eloquently. Theorems are about brevity, about the point and only the point. And somehow you turned them into a poem. Well done, dear, well done. Especially for someone whose greatest poetic achievement prior to this was a limerick about a normal sized house. xD

:heart:

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:iconstormchylde:
YAYY normal sized houses! 8DD

I think theorems are worded really interestingly. :0 Weirdly enough. THANKS THOUGH. <33

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I would like to be the air that inhabits you for a moment only. I would like to be that unnoticed, and that necessary.
:icondarkbell:
I love it!
but I have not taken geometry...
So..
I don't understand the actuality of it much.. minus the Pythagorean Theorem

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"I smell Chestnut Flowers."
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:iconstormchylde:
Haha, I actually don't really understand any of this. I just ripped it off Wikipedia. XD

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I would like to be the air that inhabits you for a moment only. I would like to be that unnoticed, and that necessary.
:icondarkbell:
XD

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"I smell Chestnut Flowers."
[link]
:iconeatingmyownfears:
YAY MATH POETRY!! :heart:

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Don't blame me.

I'm just here for the cookies.
:iconstormchylde:
YAYYYY~ :iconeeeeeplz:

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I would like to be the air that inhabits you for a moment only. I would like to be that unnoticed, and that necessary.
:iconeatingmyownfears:
Exactly! :D

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Don't blame me.

I'm just here for the cookies.
:iconberenice63:
This flowed really nice. But it's one of those pieces that I need to read a few times to get my head around. Lovely.

--
Failures are finger posts on the road to achievement.
C. S. Lewis

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