This is what plane geometry (Euclidian geometry)
tells me;
it tells me that [a];
(the long, curving line
of your neck, outlined
in the darkest of chestnut curls)
plus [b];
(the swell of your hip
rising from the sheets, the sweet temptation
and the beautiful mystery of the
hidden)
equals [c];
(the wonder that you
perhaps do not see in my gaze
when you catch me
staring)
II
Euclids Five Postulates
tell me;
1. Let the following be postulated: to follow
the flower of your lips
and the swans curve of your
jaw
2. To produce [extend] a finite limb with infinite
ad infinitum widening my eyes
and awing me with your
unwitting dancers grace
3. To describe a circle on the
to trace around your belly button
navigating the breathtaking landscape
of your valleys and knolls
4. That all will be right with the world
circumscribe a closed figure about my
body, that we are
equal to one another
5. The parallel postulate: That, if upon falling
I become greater than I was
before we met;
we will exist parallel to one another
indefinitely [yes]
III
Euclid [I] believed
that his axioms were self-evident statements
about physical reality.
All I know is that; (taken as a physical
description of space, postulate 2)
asserting that space [and love] has no
boundaries
(i.e., they are homogenous);
and [postulate 4]
that they [we] are also isotropic,
so that figures [we] may be moved
to any location [and to any distance]
while maintaining
[happiness; devotion; ardor]
congruence.
IV
This is what plane geometry (Euclidian geometry)
does not need to tell me;
you + me =
geometric perfection
[love.]














Comments
How did you do it? Theorems are not worded eloquently. Theorems are about brevity, about the point and only the point. And somehow you turned them into a poem. Well done, dear, well done. Especially for someone whose greatest poetic achievement prior to this was a limerick about a normal sized house. xD
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I think theorems are worded really interestingly. :0 Weirdly enough. THANKS THOUGH. <33
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I would like to be the air that inhabits you for a moment only. I would like to be that unnoticed, and that necessary.
but I have not taken geometry...
So..
I don't understand the actuality of it much.. minus the Pythagorean Theorem
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"I smell Chestnut Flowers."
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I would like to be the air that inhabits you for a moment only. I would like to be that unnoticed, and that necessary.
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"I smell Chestnut Flowers."
[link]
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Don't blame me.
I'm just here for the cookies.
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I would like to be the air that inhabits you for a moment only. I would like to be that unnoticed, and that necessary.
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Don't blame me.
I'm just here for the cookies.
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Failures are finger posts on the road to achievement.
C. S. Lewis
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